Double Page Spread - Version One

Here is Version one of my double page spread.

I'm not keen on the image, its out of focus and I don't think it stands out to the audience enough, also I havent edited enough to get rid of colour except the yellow flower, I also don't like the colour of St.Sunflower I don't think it matches well with the magazine. I like the layout of the page and the placement of the text. I need to change my image and the head mast.