Here is my first version on the contents page
I think the background is too cluttered and dull, it makes the text hard to read. Also my images are all very pixelated and dont look very professional. I like the title of the page I think it stands out really well. Also their is not enough listing on my page, if this was a proper magazine it would have over at least 100 page listings. I think this version looks really unprofessional it needs a lot of changing. It needs more colour,better images and a new layout.
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